[Warfare Event Extension] O'Raan Afreets (Redone)

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[Warfare Event Extension] O'Raan Afreets (Redone) Sept 24, 2018 14:27:25 GMT

Post by Oraan on Sept 24, 2018 14:27:25 GMT

► Prize Pool - Story

Every Name Mentioned in this Prize Pool has Earned An Event Extension. The Following Parameters of the Event Extension:

Can Either Take Place During the One Year Time-Skip

Can Either Take Place After the Events of "Warfare"

Do Not Attempt to Obtain Any Particular Prize or Benefit, the Grader Shall Decide.

Either Time Setting Requires the Story to Resolve Around or Include Your Membership with Your Villain Gang.

O’Raan was laid up in the emergency care center after getting Zel X and himself to safety, O’Raan was badly injured. He was in the hospital for awhile. His face was badly damaged to the point of needing reconstructive surgery. Due to not being in Wakanda the care that he would have gotten was not as good, which meant that his face no longer looked the same as it had before war broke out. His extensive injuries would take time to heal. With his blood loss, O’Raan slipped into a coma during surgery and didn’t wake up for half a year.

He didn’t know it at the time, but his hair had gotten completely disheveled during that time. One of the nurses was kind enough to keep him clean shaven and give him a hair style suitable to his newly scarred face.

His family probably believed him to be dead. His wife Ry’Anne (Amaterasu Quirk) would be forced to take care of take care of their five children on her own. The first three children; J’Lynn (Telekinesis Quirk, J’E (Quirkless, uses Fire and lightning technology with a boxing fighting skill), and A’Nessa (Mecha Transformation Quirk) were from a marriage before O’Raan. O’Raan and Ry’Anne’s ex-husband ended up fighting each other in ritual combat when O’Raan tried to defend his now wife from being mistreated. They were already friends, but their bond deepened because of it. The two then had A’Rya(Fox Kitsune fire and lightning Quirk) and A’Aron (Anti-Quirk) afterwards. Each of the children had their own abilities and look, although they all shared one thing in common...white hair. O’Raan’s eyes were blood red while Ry’Anne’s was a bright Golden color. J’Lynn, J’E and A’Nessa all shared their mother’s eyes while A’Rya shared her father’s. A’Aron however was completely different. He originally displayed his mother’s golden eyes, however after awakening his Anti-Quirk ability, experienced a condition called heterochromia. It caused his left eye to turn bloodshot red like his father’s while his right stayed golden.

O’Raan had visions of them while in his comatose state. But those visions were broken when he was visited by none other than Zel X. He could feel his energy as soon as he walked in the room. It permeated from his skin. He had almost forgot that Zel X had fused with the Brother’s Dread. He was having a conversation in extremely hushed tones. O’Raan could barely understand whats was being said or two whom, however he heard something about how he “doesn’t look as he did before.”

This bothered O’Raan. If he didn’t look the same, how would his family feel? Would they welcome him with open arms or would they reject him? No. He need not think like that. He needed to wake up and get back to them. O’Raan tried to force himself awake to no avail. But he did not give up. He kept trying. He failed. He could kill himself. His family was going on without him, probably believing him to be dead, and this was all the strength that he could muster? He became infuriated with himself. It was then that his eyes popped open and he teleported himself a few feet up off of the hospital bed. As the Dark energy that he had within him suddenly enveloped him in a large ball that hovered in the air. Zel X and the other individuals each tried to grab hold of him, and upon touching the dark energy orb were transported out and away from the hospital. O’Raan then screamed out loud, his anger and pain ringing out throughout the hospital. The Dark Energy Orb then suddenly turned bloodshot red to match his eyes before it then collapsed in upon O’Raan transported him to another place. O’Raan crawled up from the ground and placed his back up against a large boulder that seemed to have been carved out. He leaned his head back and rested, only to lose consciousness yet again. His ribs were still heavily bandaged. His shirt ripped open from the swirling energy of the orb.

Zel X and the others found him past out yet again. They were no longer whispering to each other. The one of them began gesturing to O’Raan. Zel X then bent down next to O’Raan and touched his shoulder to temporarily. fuse him inside of his body. It would be easy to transport him this way and it won’t be permanent. As O’Raan hitched a ride inside Zel X, they traveled to the Lucas Headquarters.

Zel X then spoke to the other’s. ~~You three will begin his training.~~ I have a feeling that his spatial ability is much more powerful than even he knows. And we will develop it into a powerful weapon. A simple ‘Mover’ he shall be no longer. If his powers were as strong as what they should have been, we wouldn’t have faced as devastating a loss as we did.

Time has passed since O’Raan had been injured. He still hadn’t been able to get word out to his family that he was alive and well...that is until the day that he was ordered to find his way into Wakanda to sneak past it’s defenses and learn all of their weak spots and report back. They unknowingly wanted him to betray his own people. O’Raan stood in a bathroom and splashed water on his face. He looked at his right arm and he could still see the scars where they had to do reconstructive surgery on his arm in order to make it fully functional. It looked horrible at first, however he got a tattoo placed over it so that he did not look so bad. Staring at the mirror, O’Raan took his hands and pulled down his bottom lip to reveal the War Dog tattoo placed on his bottom lip. He let go and a smile pierced his face as he spoke four words that he needed to hear in order to believe it to be true.

I am going home.

Last Edit: Sept 30, 2018 16:39:21 GMT by Big News Gecko

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[Warfare Event Extension] O'Raan Afreets (Redone) Sept 24, 2018 15:16:08 GMT

Post by Oraan on Sept 24, 2018 15:16:08 GMT

It was not long before O'Raan was back within the walls of Wakanda. He initially was going to infiltrate their protective shield via force, however he figured that his best bet would be to enter with good terms rather than bad. This would, however, require him to get the attention of important people within the true Wakandan walls. He had been gone for a year, he wasn't sure how things would have changed. All he knew was that he wanted to go home, hug his wife and children.

He started off by amassing a small black orb and then making it larger and larger until it was begin enough for someone to notice. One of the Sentry Guards came to investigate what was going on; O'Raan quickly dispelled the large black orb. He greeted the Sentry Guard in typical Wakandan fashion; his hands made fists as he crossed his arms across his chest like an X. It hadn't even occurred to O'Raan before, his scar was definitely a symbol of his faithfulness to Wakanda, despite it not being the reason that it is now there. He then recalled a conversation that he had with his trainers.

Trainer 1: You needed a new name. Darklighter was not one that would instill fear in your enemies.

Trainer 2: SOMETHING THAT WILL MAKE PEOPLE KNOW WHO YOU ARE AS SOON AS THEY SEE YOU.

Trainer 3: AHH YES!!! SCAR!!! A PERFECT NAME.

The Blind brother then closed in upon O'Raan and began to touch his face, the place where he knew the scar to be located.

Trainer 1: Yes, it is indeed a name that would bring fear to the hearts of those whom decide to cross you. So from here on out, that will be your name. Scar. Let us begin our training.

Scar didn't get a choice in the matter. The Lucas Organization was his family as far as they were concerned. But he was no fool. He understood that it was a way to erase Darklighter from the world and make it appear that he was actually dead. They knew nothing of his origin, and he pretended to not remember. All so that this moment would come that he would be able to come home. Convincing them that he was the ideal person to sneak into Wakanda, however, that was the tricky part...

The Sentry Guard was shocked at the 'Wakanda Forever' that was portrayed to him. He had no clue who the individual before him was, and it was suspect that he would use that. Scar then turned down his bottom lip with his hand, portraying the War Dog tattoo that was under his lip. The Sentry Guard was even more baffled. He requested that Scar surrender himself and any weapons that he had with him. Scar knew what would happen, and continued to walk forward while showing that he had no weapons on him. After all, he did not need any. Any weapon that he needed he could acquire from anyone that happened to have a weapon on them at the time.

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[Warfare Event Extension] O'Raan Afreets (Redone) Sept 24, 2018 15:17:40 GMT

Post by Oraan on Sept 24, 2018 15:17:40 GMT

Scar had a bag put over his head and was led in chains to the Hall of King T'Challa. The bag was then removed as he stood facing the leaders of every tribe. All in their traditional garb. Before either of them could speak, Scar interjected with an emphatic statement of his own.

Scar: Thank you, King T'Challa. I would hail Wakanda, if my arms were not subdued. I understand the circumstances but I do not want to waste much of your time. I have but one request. Before we get started, can you please bring the wife and children of one O'Raan Afreets to the hall so that I can give them some news.

Scar paused but for a moment before he made sure to add a statement of fact.

Scar: All five children please. Including those of Ry'Anne and J'L; his stepchildren.

The Tribal Council all looked bewildered at how a man that none of them knew would come to Wakanda to request to speak to the children and spouse of a man who was seemingly dead for some time.

It took a good thirty minutes or so before the entire family was gathered. They all stood around the room looking on in earnest. They wanted to hear news of their loved one. And so Scar did not keep them waiting long. However it hurt his heart to see them all, and a single tear ran down his eye as he looked at each of them. They had all grown up. He looked to his wife when he spoke.

Scar: Let me begin with an apology. Ry'Anne, J'Lynn, J'E, A'Nessa, A'Ryana, and A'Aron...I am truly sorry.

Her entire face looked confused before she and all of the children finally understood. At first it seemed to everyone that he was sending them their condolences for the loss of O'Raan. So they were all confused when the wife and children all burst out into tears of joy and pain and ran to hug the man in front of them. It looked as if they were elated that O'Raan was dead. It wasn't until Ry'Anne grabbed and kissed the man that they understood. This man was in fact O'Raan himself. It took awhile for the murmurs going around to stop. O'Raan looked into the face of his family and again spoke to them.

O'Raan/Scar: I'm sorry.

Ry'Anne smiled before swiftly raising her right hand and smacking him as hard as she could before bursting into tears again.

O'Raan/Scar: Let me explain.

He began to regurgitate the events that led up to his disappearance over the time of his disappearance. It ended with the war and how he came by his new appearance.

O'Raan/Scar: ... and now I am being forced to infiltrate Wakanda on behalf of the Lucas Family to try to figure out a way around our defenses. King T'Challa, you need to state that you captured me in the midst of all the fighting using a hero with a new young hero with the quirk capable of stopping me from using mine. Send an envoy out to them that states that any further action will be considered a declaration of war, and that as a prisoner of war, you will be keeping me here locked up. Any attempt on my life would mean my death. I understand that you all have a lot to think over, however in the meanwhile, I am requesting that I be able to spend the remaining time that I have with my family. I understand that this may not be granted, I am a villain afterall, and such liberties may not be extended to me, however I am a Wakandan through and through. And while I may make my living how I make my living; my home, my family...they are off limits. Let the X scar on my face not only be a symbol of my facial reconstruction, but of my loyalty to Wakanda.

When he said the words, they looked at his scar even more intently than they were previously. The 'X' shaped scar was in fact a symbolism to the "Wakanda Forever" gesture. All of the Tribal Leaders nodded their head in agreement.

King T'Challa: I will summon the Gorilla Tribe leader and have a discussion about the appropriate punishment that your actions have caused. I will also take your words into extreme consideration about how I shall react in the best interest for Wakanda. I thank you, O'Raan. You bear no allegiance to me, however you came here first. It will be noted. And as a show of appreciation, you will be escorted out with your family to spend time with them for one week while we deliberate. The escort will then bring you back here to speak to your judgement.

O'Raan bowed, and then touched his first to his face...his own version of "Wakanda Forever".

Last Edit: Sept 30, 2018 17:00:59 GMT by Big News Gecko

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[Warfare Event Extension] O'Raan Afreets (Redone) Sept 30, 2018 18:07:37 GMT Oraan likes this

Post by Big News Gecko on Sept 30, 2018 18:07:37 GMT

φ Official Grading φ

I truly think it is a shame you used the event-extension to establish what seems as a necessary setup for future plans. I understand the reasoning behind it, especially since you are working alongside the Wakandian Role-Players to create this global plot line. The reason why I do not have the best opinions about the extension is because you lent the opportunity to solely supporting the big picture.

Not much effort was put int establishing character development. Coming from someone that is finally reading about the character in an more intimate plot line, I barely got to learn about this character. Aside from personal opinion, you have successfully completed the event-extension. I unfortunately cannot give any faction rewards based on the ending of your story. You'll receive an a Surplus Package of currencies.

Surplus Package:

Fifty [50] FAME
Five [5] Trait Points
One Hundred [100] EXP
Three [3] Ascension Points
Six Thousand [6,000] Gold

Last Edit: Sept 30, 2018 18:26:29 GMT by Big News Gecko

[Warfare Event Extension] O'Raan Afreets (Redone)

Post by Oraan on Sept 24, 2018 14:27:25 GMT

Post by Oraan on Sept 24, 2018 15:16:08 GMT

Post by Oraan on Sept 24, 2018 15:17:40 GMT

Post by Big News Gecko on Sept 30, 2018 18:07:37 GMT

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